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Newly Found Power by ~Angel0fMusic:iconAngel0fMusic:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Spoken Word


She had it, she knew it
She had waited so long
She liked it, what was it?
On the tip of her tongue

It was fear; it was cruel
It was all she wanted
But was not the right tool
By which to be haunted

She had lives in her hands
Not meant to treat lightly
Just a few simple plans
Could end very spitely

Could she just ignore it?
Only one way to mend?
This one final option
And then it was the
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Author's Comments

This is written for
It is about a new found power we both experienced the same feelings for... That is to say... a Drivers Licence. =]


[The missing word is "end," if you didn't get that]

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~RedDragon888 Mar 22, 2007, 5:34:47 PM
lolz! drivers license. I like it! ^^

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~wickedkat Mar 22, 2007, 5:59:52 PM
i like it. thanks. only issue "spitely"= nonword
-kat

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~barniesboy Mar 23, 2007, 1:13:03 AM
This is a great poem but try in the future to focus on your rhyme scheme, the word "end" at the END is very misleading. In my opinion (which doesn’t matter) the poem seems unfinished without it.

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~Angel0fMusic Mar 24, 2007, 9:18:25 PM
I know... I looked it up. =/

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~Angel0fMusic Mar 24, 2007, 9:19:57 PM
I know... that was uh, kinda the point... =/
Thanks though! I appreciate honest comments. =]

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~Hi-Jinks Mar 30, 2007, 4:57:49 PM
i likes it a lots! :D (mAgIc wOrDs~!)

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~Angel0fMusic Mar 31, 2007, 6:51:08 PM
Much thanks love! :hug:

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~Yokoono123 Apr 20, 2007, 6:47:05 AM
Really pretty, I love this peice

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~Angel0fMusic Apr 22, 2007, 2:23:17 PM
thanks a lot. =]

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